When making written complaints of this nature, its best to be short and direct.
Mentioning that you are publishing the letter on websites won't raise an eyebrow, but maybe a smile.
I see no demands for expenses and time, so I'm guessing you just want to put your point across that the experience has been one long haul to just get to where you are now.
I don't think that buying ex-display goods affects your consumer rights, but you may want to read up what HG's Tand C's are on the matter. They may have a clause in which you get 85% of the value of the returned item. I dunno? look into it.
Good luck though and I wish you a speedy end to this sorry tale.
I was in HG in Manchester today, went to buy a disc lock.
Walking to the counter I noticed that the cable ties that hold the lock in its packaging had been cut and a quick squeeze of the box indicated that it had been opened previously. Basically it all crumbled with a bit of pressure,( crumble may not be the right word, fell apart may be better).
I asked the two wise monkeys behind the counter if they were resale items.
The one with his hands over his mouth said nowt.
The other one couldn't hear me as he had his hands over his ears.
I'm glad the third wise monkey wasn't around,he'd have said fuck all anyway.
So, because I was met with ignorance I walked back to the locks display. And a quick scan of the items pretty much confirmed my initial thoughts of the item being a resale. Most of the other items were in previously opened or damaged packaging.
I said " They are aren't they, they are all resale items aren't they.
Again , I was ignored , except the dumb one went "huh?"
So I slid the disc lock down the counter to him.
Waited a second or two and asked again if they were resale. I got a reply of "no , no ".
I said "No", also.
I've a feeling that they were being cagey and arrogant due to the 2 jailbaits that were sniffing round the shop.
Unfortunatly, I hate this level of service and will be reporting my experience to Trading Standards.
HG Manchester, where two wise monkeys are no good when you need three.